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Elyse,
I understood the main point of your paper to be that teachers only focuses on what is known about a paper and they do not think about the important aspect of creativity within your writing. You had great supporting arguments you tied in a variety of different arguments and they all tied together very well. Also that everyone does write differently but it is important to be able to put your own spin on creativity within your writing. I liked how you tied in the definition's of creative and creativity because it helped when you went into what you think of creativity as. I thought that the conversation within your paper was excellent and that it flowed together very well. I thought your paper meet a lot of the requirements for the paper, it was hard to find major things to point out since Mr. Whicker went over your paper in class. I mainly just saw a few small errors and than some wording was a bit confusing and just some minor corrections. You covered all of the elements asked for this paper very well and I thought you conclusion was an excellent end to your paper and it tied up all of the loose ends. You did a great job good luck sending your paper off to the publication.
Tracy Keck
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