Thursday, February 23, 2012

Final Cover Letter for Paper #3

Link: http://mollytracyelyse.webs.com/


In our website we try and persuade readers that depending on the school you attend and the money your school has affects your writing, reading, and other academic abilities. We collected a variety of research by interviewing 7 different students who attend schools that were either public, private, or boarding schools. What we concluded from this research we found that based on the school you attended does have an affect on your education. Due to the amount of money your school has and how they use it, the students who attend your school, the variety of classes and teachers plays major roles into students levels of understand literacies. Everyone in the end achieves a similar education it just depends on your level from the school they attend. Our counter arguments are that even though not all schools have an excess of money if they have quality teachers students can achieve a quality education even if they are not the richest school. Our counter argument may be lacking and we would appreciate any advice you have on improving our counter argument please focus on the main point of our article and also consider the affects on money within schools. If given more time we would have liked to use the Freedom Writer Diary to add in some sources and another view of a different form of education via inner city schools. 

1 comment:

  1. I agree with your answer to #1, if they would've been able to come to a compromise, they would've had a positive outcome.

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